OCC: Fallen Angels Feedback

[drjackwolfe]

I am soooo creating a ps/psi blaster named Ms. Black. I hope no one minds Jack playing to the press, essentally turning over the GA name and talking about forming NUL. Just seems to make sense for him to take the Tony Stark Role here...cause he's not bruce wayne...nope, never.



On a realted note, Rose's RP prompts in the offical forums have at least 2 stories related to our resurection.

[snowdog]

hee. loving the way you're taking it. Besides Jack can handle his booze better than Stark any day ^.^

and darn it...i couldn't resist. Though couldn't get Mr Green, but there is now a impervium katana wielding scrapper in an Armani suit named Mr Weiss.

[gothicshark]

Sept 9, 2010 11:40:44 GMT -5 snowdog said:

and darn it...i couldn't resist. Though couldn't get Mr Green, but there is now a impervium katana wielding scrapper in an Armani suit named Mr Weiss.

so should I make a Mr or a Ms Pink?

[snowdog]

heh, the Wolfetech Legal 'Defense' team?

[drjackwolfe]

That would be completely cool. All suits and short skirts and calm cool collected folks. All though I might go with fund. The WLDF, you know for charity status and pro bono work.

Arrest the hellion, give him your card.

[killswitch]

This gives me a reason to make that concept character ive been wanting to since demon summoning. A lawyer that handles demonic contract negotiations between hell and the world of the living.

"Your selling your soul to win the lottery? I could get you your own oil company. That will pay your bills AND fill your children's trust funds. Let's talk."

[gothicshark]

I will use this form to respond to what has been posted, Caios I love your writing style, I actually Laughed at the final Line...and eveyone else this is good drama, love it.

[drjackwolfe]

Actually Goth, I want people to respond to the writing here, feedbackis the best way to encourage writers, I guess we can take the other stuff over tot he non-RP blood angels thread (Planning thread?) But, cause it's RP related I present Ms. Black Esq.

Meet Tessa Black


Former Model and Force Recon Marine


Current Lawyer and troubleshooter for Wolfetec


Whose real nemisis, since her team is supposed to be low profile, is the Paparazi....at least she learned the lesson about panties from Paris Hilton



I blame snowdog for making her compelling in his stories, I blame myself for taking the panty shot and not realizing I had commited a Anime cliche till I opend the file Oh and the costume creator leaves a lot to be desired when your just trying to do a sophisticated business look. DP/PSI blaster. At least they have the Audrey Hepburn sunglasses.

[Hollowpoint Heroism]

I'm seriously loving this whole thing. Was the perfect situation to drag Shadowstormm back into the fray. Way I figure his thinking is this: If Donlad White is going to start a Media Blitz? Well Stormmy's going to begin striking back in the same manner.

He was camera-shy to begin with, in fact, up until the point he deliberately strode out on film, he'd never been sucessfully recorded or photographed. However, He's seeing the value of it here.


Also, to drop a bit of information: Shadowstormm's currently on fairly good terms with MI-5, also with the CIA considering his sister, Olivia started working there shortly after his disappearance.

Dunno if anyone wants to use those to effect or not.

[caios]

Awesome, great feedback. I think all the posts are wonderful so far! Let's keep it going.

One more thing I wanted to throw out there again just to make sure. I'm going to start posting this story on the official Virtue boards soon. With luck we might get more people interested both in the story and the groups. Mainly though I think this is cool stuff that should be shared.

I want to make sure there are no issues or objections with this before I start posting. I plan to post everyone else's writing here myself, with appropriate credits as well.

[The Cheshire Cat]

For the moment, Julie Brennan will be the person that acts for Abyssal Corona outside of jail. For the moment ;P

Think of Julie as a sort of Pepper Potts/Alfred kind of character; the hyper-competent assistant who doesn't actually have any super powers. She's just REALLY good at her job.

[snowdog]

i am hip with your posting this

[drjackwolfe]

post away caios

[caios]

So have been posting this story on the main boards. Most recently using mariel's account since I had to borrow her computer on account of the move.

At this moment in the story itself most folks are waiting for people to meetup in the cave. There's still opportunity to post any thoughts or reactions as people arrive.

I have plenty of plans and ideas of where to go next and how to get all the info we need but I want everyone to be involved as much as possible so you can all put up whatever ideas you want to persue.

Eventually to keep things moving I'm gonna assume everyone that said they're heading to the cave have arrived and everyone has been discussing the situation. At which point I'll probably pick things up from there and start pushing the story forward if no one else has done that yet.

My idea is while everyone else is hunting down evidence and intel to clear names, those that might be less worried about landing on the wrong side of the law when everything finally settles will be going to break Ghostveil out of prison, along with any other currently incarcerated Angels that want to get out.

Caios will suggest she do that on her own, to protect everyone, so the others don't have to worry about making things worse for themselves legally.

[snowdog]

well anti-shcrodi is trying to find the place, of course there's a news story about her killing your schrodi...so her reception might be intresting. ^.^

Snowdog's out of comission, Xeno is , well, currently in the mourge, most non GA char's i have are friendly to the GA, so there are allies out there.